Personally, I remembered the Leo-not-remembering scene as more ambiguous than I think it actually was. My version of events is still possible, but I needed to have explained it better in the story itself. I only did a tardis.wikia check and didn't do a full episode rewatch while writing this fic, unfortunately, which is always a good idea with minor characters.
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Date: 2010-08-03 12:38 pm (UTC)Personally, I remembered the Leo-not-remembering scene as more ambiguous than I think it actually was. My version of events is still possible, but I needed to have explained it better in the story itself. I only did a tardis.wikia check and didn't do a full episode rewatch while writing this fic, unfortunately, which is always a good idea with minor characters.
Short version: my bad.